A Distant Soil by Colleen Doran

Discussion (9) ¬

1. 
   Arlnee

   June 15, 2012 at 1:06 am | #

   Love the look on Liana’s face: “Yeahright!”
2. 
   farbeitfromme

   June 15, 2012 at 3:39 am | #

   They’re hiding their eyes because if they’re caught looking, someone above them might take those eyes out.
3. 
   Colleen Doran

   June 15, 2012 at 11:06 am | #

   I’m going to post before and after shots of this sequence. OMG, what a difference.
4. 
   farbeitfromme

   June 15, 2012 at 11:50 am | #

   Fantastic! You’re my Avatar!
5. 
   Colleen Doran

   June 15, 2012 at 12:13 pm | #

   Really, I’m siting here looking at version 1 and version 2 and I can’t believe it. Version 1 is incomprehensible.
6. 
   Arlnee

   June 15, 2012 at 8:31 pm | #

   I’ve got my copy of Vol 4 and yeah, the difference is mind blowing.
7. 
   Colleen Doran

   June 15, 2012 at 9:15 pm | #

   That edition will never be reprinted, BTW.
8. 
   Colleen Doran

   June 16, 2012 at 1:53 pm | #

   Testing. Site update came with some glitches.
9. 
   scribblerworks

   June 17, 2012 at 12:32 am | #

   Like Arlnee – I got my copy of Vol 4 out too. Wow, this version is great. So much more at play in this version of the scene!

   Excellent, Colleen!

   (Makes me excited about what you’re going to unfold once you get the story rolling again! Ooo! )